La Chronicles Hecata

So if I understand this correctly, you play a Giovanni at the same time that Bloodlines takes place to show off how they get the sarcophagus. I like that idea, it's a bit similar to the Prelude ! But I still don't like that you meet all the same people. Meeting the Rossilinis and Giovannis is fine, but meeting Johnny, Heather and Mercurio is too much of an coincidence, especially as they don't have the right accents. Also the latter basically gives you the same missions as in Bloodlines and both the Ocean House and the beachhouse maps are outdated and buggy!



Yeah, writing dialogues is hard for us non native speakers. Prelude II has been delayed for that over and over! In your case though, I noticed that you often copied exactly the same lines from the original game which is noticable for somebody like me. I suggest to find your own words and then have them improved by a native speaker. MooCha is from England and Signothorn is from the US, one of them could help!



They would be great for training purposes and should be easy to create for the Giovanni, look how many they have in their crypts! Also you could use the ghosts in the crypt to introduce the Giovanni discipline.



My suggestion is this: Get rid of all the intro, tutorial, Mercurio visual novel stuff (because you can hardly move before a fade-out happens) and start off at the Empire hotel. Maybe this is where Elena is residing, but she gives you the pizzeria room as your haven. From there she sends you to the new mansion, which is an amazingly build map , and from there you are send to get the museum keys and so forth. At the moment I am stuck at the pizzeria because the Mercurio quest fails. The log says something about searching the place. Is this about the pizzeria or the beachhouse? Your logs need to be a little more precise as well !